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Sunday, September 19, 2021

The Lees of Happiness

F. Scott Fitzgerald (1896–1940)
From F. Scott Fitzgerald: Novels & Stories 1920–1922

Franz Heinrich Corinth on His Sickbed, 1888, oil on canvas by German artist Lovis Corinth (1858–1925). WikiGallery.
A few months after the publication of his debut novel, This Side of Paradise (1920), twenty-three-year-old F. Scott Fitzgerald sent a letter to the editor of his books, Max Perkins. “Just finished the best story I've done yet,” he wrote, “& my novel is going to be my life masterpiece.” Neither half of this statement would prove true. His second novel, The Beautiful and Damned, is widely regarded as his weakest and the story, “The Lees of Happiness,” has been largely ignored by critics and readers alike since its inclusion in Tales of the Jazz Age (1922), Fitzgerald’s second collection.

Edmund Wilson, who reviewed Tales of the Jazz Age for Vanity Fair shortly after it appeared, wrote that Fitzgerald “lets his fancy, his humor and his taste for nonsense run wild; it is the Fitzgerald harlequinade with a minimum of magazine hokum.” (He likely knew that Fitzgerald had originally suggested Sideshow as the title for the book.) Wilson, who had been a year ahead of Fitzgerald at Princeton University and had become his friend, mentor, and rival, could be unsparing in his sarcasm and criticism, and he spent much of the review discussing “The Lees of Happiness.” The story appeared in the book’s last section with two selections Wilson called “delightful burlesques,” including one that had its origin in a sketch that had appeared in the Princeton magazine he had edited when both men were undergraduates. Wilson claimed, then, that he initially assumed Fitzgerald was employing his “mastery of the ridiculous” to satirize “the bitter short story of [Edith] Wharton and of fiction since Maupassant” but was startled to realize at the end of “The Lees” that the tale “was intended to be serious.” He then launched his zinger: Fitzgerald “always has some surprise: just when you think the joke is going to be on you, it may turn out to be on him.”

Several selections in Tales of the Jazz Age, including “The Lees of Happiness,” exhibit what The Cambridge Companion to F. Scott Fitzgerald calls “his flirtation with naturalism” during 1920–21, when he was “working under the spell of ‘the meaningless of life’ philosophy.” This cynicism, not uncharacteristic among members of his generation in the years immediately following World War I, pervades his stories during this period, as well as The Beautiful and Damned. After Fitzgerald sent “The Lees of Happiness” to the Chicago Tribune, he admitted in a follow-up letter to the editor, Burton Rascoe, “It’s perhaps a little gloomy.” Rascoe decided to publish it anyway, even though he damned the story as “sentimental” when he reviewed Tales of the Jazz Age three years later.

In sum, as British literary scholar Lionel Kelly notes in an essay that takes a fresh (and more appreciative) look at the story, “It has not had a good press from Fitzgerald’s critics, though it persistently appears in English collections of his stories.” For his part, Kelly admits he hadn’t previously discussed it in his own writing because he “had formed a sentimental attachment to it which has something to do with its capacity to deal in romantic illusion.” The lack of “good press” is largely due to those romantic (however illusory) and sentimental aspects—unusual for a story by Fitzgerald, who had just married Zelda Sayre three months earlier—and several critics have suggested that the story reflects his anxiety about both his marriage and his writing career. In the three decades since the publication of Kelly’s essay in 1989, however, the story and especially the collection that contains it have received renewed attention among readers, aided unexpectedly by the 2008 film adaptation of another story in the book: “The Curious Case of Benjamin Button.”

While Fitzgerald was assembling Tales of the Jazz Age, he came up with the idea of describing in the book’s table of contents the inspiration and background for each story; one of the remarkable things about the annotations is that several weigh a story’s strengths against its faults—especially the weaknesses pointed out by critics and admirers after the selections appeared in periodicals. The overall impression is that Fitzgerald didn’t think much of many of his own stories, because (he admits) he had written some of them for the money magazine editors were willing to pay the century’s newest literary ingenue. It is hardly an exaggeration to say that this annotated listing has received more attention from scholars and biographers than have many of the stories in the book.

Fitzgerald’s initial draft for the annotation for “The Lees of Happiness” apparently contained an unambiguous comparison to the fiction of Henry James. After reviewing the copy for the table of contents, Perkins wrote to his author: “I don’t think Henry James had anything in the world to do with you at all, and so is not appropriate—but in all but details this material is admirable for our purposes.” When he returned the edited draft, Fitzgerald responded, “I have followed your suggestion about cutting the Henry James episode.” Yet he still mentions James in the final version, linking the story to an unidentified (and possibly fictitious) critic who anthologizes stories that all begin with hemming and hawing as if they were written by James—thereby suggesting to readers that Fitzgerald’s story, too, starts out like a Henry James tale:
Of this story I can say that it came to me in an irresistible form, crying to be written. It will be accused perhaps of being a mere piece of sentimentality, but, as I saw it, it was a great deal more. If, therefore, it lacks the ring of sincerity, or even of tragedy, the fault rests not with the theme but with my handling of it.

It appeared in the “Chicago Tribune,” and later obtained, I believe, the quadruple gold laurel leaf or some such encomium from one of the anthologists who at present swarm among us. The gentleman I refer to runs as a rule to stark melodramas with a volcano or the ghost of John Paul Jones in the rôle of Nemesis, melodramas carefully disguised by early paragraphs in Jamesian manner which hint dark and subtle complexities to follow. On this order:

“The case of Shaw McPhee, curiously enough, had no bearing on the almost incredible attitude of Martin Sulo. This is parenthetical and, to at least three observers, whose names for the present I must conceal, it seems improbable, etc., etc., etc.,” until the poor rat of fiction is at least forced out into the open and the melodrama begins.
We present the story below and leave it to our readers to decide if it resembles in any way a story by James or Wharton or Maupassant—or if it simply represents a unique contribution to Fitzgerald’s oeuvre.

Notes: In his reappraisal of Fitzgerald’s story, Lionel Kelly notes the ambiguity of the title. In modern English, “lees” is the plural of lee, referring to shelter and protection from wind and storm. But a less common use of “lees” refers to the sediment or dregs at the bottom of a barrel of wine. Kelly points out a reference in the Oxford English Dictionary to this excerpt from Macbeth:

Had I but died an hour before this chance,
I had lived a blessed time; for, from this instant,
There 's nothing serious in mortality:
All is but toys: renown and grace is dead;
The wine of life is drawn, and the mere lees
Is left this vault to brag of.

Richard Harding Davis was a novelist and playwright but was perhaps most famous as a war correspondent in the late 1800s and early 1900s. His contemporary, Frank Norris, was an editor and novelist whose works included McTeague and The Octopus. Port Arthur (Lüshun) in Manchuria is the location where a Russian garrison surrendered to the Japanese on January 2, 1905, after a siege lasting over six months. At Château-Thierry, a town on the Marne River 40 miles east of Paris, American troops helped stop a major German offensive in early June 1918. The Florodora Sextette were six actresses who sang the hit song “Tell Me Pretty Maiden” in the Broadway musical comedy Florodora (1900). A Gibson girl was the image of a fashionable young woman of the upper classes, based on the popular drawings of illustrator Charles Dana Gibson. Lillian Russell was one of the most famous musical theater stars from 1880 to 1920, appearing in several Gilbert & Sullivan productions; Stella Mayhew was a vaudeville and Broadway singer who appeared in numerous musicals in the first decade of the twentieth century, costarring in several with Al Jolson; the Polish actress Anna Held became famous by starring in several plays produced by Florenz Ziegfeld, her common-law husband.

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Saturday, March 2, 2019

Some Like Them Cold

Ring Lardner (1885–1933)
From Ring Lardner: Stories & Other Writings

“She Has Got No Use for the Boys But Treats Them Like Dirt.” Detail from an illustration for “Some Like Them Cold,” in the October 1, 1921, issue of The Saturday Evening Post.
Ring Lardner was keen to hit it big on the stage. Over the course of his career he wrote more than one hundred plays, sketches, and skits. His earliest attempt, a musical, dates from 1903, when the eighteen-year-old was dabbling in community theater productions in his hometown of Niles, Michigan. Yet, even after he became famous, his many attempts to see his work staged were often frustrated by producers, directors, and actors. After he created various sketches to be used in the annual Ziegfeld Follies revues, he published an essay complaining that the performers reworked the script in favor of their own crowd-pleasing one-liners. “Why is his name attached to them on the program?” the author mused about himself before declaring, “I wouldn’t cash the checks neither if it wasn’t for the wife and kiddies.”

Years later, Ring Lardner Jr. recalled when his father asked George M. Cohan how to become a success in show business. “You’ve been in the theatre business for twenty years,” Ring Sr. said. “You write songs and sing them. You dance. You write plays and produce them. You know everything there is to know about the theater. You’re the one man who can tell me what I want to know. Mr. Cohan, how the hell does a guy get on the water wagon?” Their conversation led to the 1928 collaboration Elmer the Great, a Broadway flop that cost Lardner $6,000 even though the play seen by audiences retained hardly anything he wrote for it. Before opening night of the trial run in Chicago, he jokingly (and nervously) wrote in his trademark dialect to his former colleagues at the Chicago Tribune. “I was invited to the first rehearsal which I listened all through it and then had to ask Sam Forrest the director if I hadn’t fell into the wrong theater by mistake.”

Elmer the Great closed on Broadway in October after forty performances, a source of embarrassment to its alleged cowriter. Nevertheless, a few weeks later George Kaufman invited Lardner to collaborate on an adaptation of his popular story “Some Like Them Cold,” which had been published in The Saturday Evening Post in 1921. Still smarting from his previous venture on Broadway, Lardner at first declined, but he soon changed his mind and by early 1929 the two writers were working together on the play. Lardner contributed the first draft, Kaufman revised it, and rehearsals began using a third draft from Lardner, who also provided the music and lyrics. Now titled June Moon, the show went through even more revisions at performances in four East Coast cities, leading up to the Broadway premiere on October 9, 1929. The reviews were excellent and the show ran for 273 performances before going on a national tour. Lardner finally had a bona fide Broadway hit.

As biographer Jonathan Yardley notes, however, “June Moon is a play about the songwriting business, a satire of Tin Pan Alley that has many funny moments but very little to do with the story upon which it is based.” The original version, “Some Like Them Cold,” is about a struggling songwriter in New York and a “working girl” in Chicago who, having briefly met at a train station, exchange a series of flirtatious letters. The story was much admired by Lardner’s contemporaries; Dorothy Parker declared it one of four great American short stories of the era, alongside selections by Ernest Hemingway, Sherwood Anderson, and Wilbur Daniel Steele. Edmund Wilson, in his 1924 assessment of Lardner’s career to date, singled out the story as showcasing his literary strengths:
He has shown an unexcelled, a perhaps unrivalled, mastery of what, since the publication of Mencken’s book, has come to be known as the American language. . . . Lardner has marked the distinction between the baseball player’s and the prize-fighter’s slang, can speak the language of the Chicago songwriter of “Some Like Them Cold,” who has come to New York to make his fortune, and has equally at his command the whole vocabulary of adolescent clichés of the young girl who writes to the songwriter, and of the quite different set of clichés of the middle-aged man from New Jersey who goes to Florida for his golden honeymoon. . . . There is nothing artificial or forced about the use of slang in these stories; it is as natural as it is apt.
Wilson pushed Lardner hard to immortalize himself with a novel, and he insisted that Lardner was selling himself short by continuing to write humor pieces for magazines. “Will Ring Lardner, then, go on to his Huckleberry Finn? . . . What bell might not Lardner ring if he set out to give us the works?” F. Scott Fitzgerald also urged Lardner to write a longer work of fiction. “He was willing to settle for a novella,” wrote Ring Lardner Jr., “and he felt it should be about Great Neck,” the Long Island community where both men lived (and, infamously, drank). “I don't know exactly what Ring said to him, but when I asked my father if he would ever write a novel, he said that after one chapter he would be even more bored than the reader.”

So Lardner never did attempt to write the big book everyone seemed to expect from him—which many critics ever since have offered as the reason why Lardner is not as widely read as he deserves to be. Still, he left us a number of great stories, including “Haircut,” “The Golden Honeymoon,” and “Some Like Them Cold,” our current Story of the Week selection.

Notes: Levy’s and Goebel’s were leading music publishers of the period. Established in 1904, the Friars Club is a private association in New York for comedians and other show business personalities. Robert W. Service is an English-born Canadian poet (1874–1958) whose popular verses (such as “The Shooting of Dan McGrew”) are anything but "high-brow." The two lyricists to whom Charles compares his writing partner are Irving Berlin (“White Christmas,” “Alexander’s Ragtime Band,” etc.) and Benny Davis (“Baby Face,” “There Goes My Heart”). Made popular by Al Jolson, “My Mammy” is a song with music by Walter Donaldson and lyrics by Joe Young and Sam M. Lewis. Bbl was a common abbreviation for barrel. Georgie White is Charles’s overly familiar name for the Broadway producer known for the musical revue George White’s Scandals, of which there were sixteen editions from 1919 to 1939.

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Friday, March 24, 2017

Dalyrimple Goes Wrong

F. Scott Fitzgerald (1896–1940)
From F. Scott Fitzgerald: Novels & Stories 1920–1922

Detail from War Hero Job Hunting [Welcome Home Hero], oil on board by American artist Norman Rockwell (1894–1978), illustration for the cover of the March 1, 1919, issue of Collier’s magazine. See the full image at Sotheby’s website.
In early August 1919 Edmund Wilson wrote to F. Scott Fitzgerald, one of his friends from Princeton, and asked him to contribute to a volume of war stories:
No Saturday Evening Post stuff, understand! Clear your mind of cant! Brace up your artistic conscience, which was always the weakest part of your talent! Forget for a moment the phosphorescences of the decaying Church of Rome! Banish whatever sentimentalities may cling about you from college! Concentrate in one short story a world of tragedy, comedy, irony, and beauty!!!
Fitzgerald had dropped out of Princeton to serve in the army—but he never actually saw combat. Soon after the U.S. entered the war in April 1917 he signed up for three weeks of military training and took the officer’s exam. He returned to school in September but soon received a commission as second lieutenant in the infantry and reported for training to Fort Leavenworth, Kansas, in November. (The captain in charge of his training platoon was Dwight D. Eisenhower.) During 1918 he was stationed at Camp Zachary Taylor, near Louisville, transferred to Camp Gordon in Georgia, and then to Camp Sheridan in Alabama. When the war ended on November 11, Fitzgerald’s regiment was still waiting to embark for France. He was discharged from the army in February 1919.

In spite of his lack of combat experience, Fitzgerald accepted Wilson’s challenge to write a war story. But he instead mailed the final draft, with the title “Variety,” to his new agent, Paul Revere Reynolds. The cover note shows he had ignored at least part of Wilson’s advice:
This is the best story I ever wrote. I wrote it with the Saturday Evening Post in mind and, if in your judgment there’s a chance there or with the Cosmopolitan, I wish you’d try them because I think it’s worth at least $250.00.
Reynolds was apparently unable to sell the story and at some point Fitzgerald changed the title to “Dalyrimple Goes Wrong.” Fitzgerald ended up sending it, along with a playlet (“Porcelain and Pink”), to The Smart Set, edited by H. L. Mencken and George Jean Nathan, “tho I think their stuff is rather punk as a rule and never send them anything until some better magazine has passed it up,” he admitted to Scribner’s Magazine editor Robert Bridges. Plus, he complained in a subsequent letter to Reynolds, “they only pay $40.00.”

The story has not received much critical attention, perhaps because it is so unlike Fitzgerald’s other work. Still, it has “the genuineness of all the stories he based on his own inner experience,” acknowledges the critic Arthur Mizener. Biographer Matthew J. Bruccoli notes that “Dalyrimple Goes Wrong” is Fitzgerald’s “earliest ironic treatment of the Horatio Alger success story,” and literary scholar Alice Hall Petry cites Theodore Dreiser’s naturalism as an influence on the depiction of Bryan Dalyrimple, who is “an extreme case of a character torn between self and society.” Perhaps the most obvious irony of this early story is to be found in the title itself: Does Dalyrimple “go wrong” when he becomes a masked burglar to make ends meet—or when he is rewarded at the end because he has learned to “cut corners” and land on “the right side of the fence”?

Notes: Mentioned on the first page is Sergeant [Alvin Cullum] York, one of the most decorated American army soldiers of World War I. British-Canadian author Robert Service is compared to burlesques shows and billiards on page 402; Fitzgerald detested his poetry, which was often set in or inspired by the Yukon. Doctor [Frank] Crane (page 408) wrote a widely syndicated inspirational newspaper column from 1909 to 1928 and published such books as Four Minute Essays (1919).

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